Week 9 FYP1: Continue writing on the project proposal - Chap 1

Update for week 9

In week 9, I have done a meeting and discussion with my supervisor on 13 October 2021 at Microsoft Team. During the meeting, my supervisor has done several checks on my proposal writing to see the content and explanation about the project. There are a few mistakes such a grammatical errors, unclear points, and lack of description about the research background. Here, I'm attaching several mistakes in the proposal.

Figure 1

Figure 2

According to that, I have done some adjustments to the proposal regarding the ideas and structure of sentences. For the incoming week, I was planning to continue writing for the rest of the topic of chapter 1. It will including the significance of the project, scopes and limitations, also a summary of chapter 1. 

Thank you.